Gift : DRACHIEby *xLineChu

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Here you are Drachie, it took me forevaaa sorry about that
I think I'm gonna make you another gift ♥
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I hope you like it!

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Critique by ~DemiLeighFreeman Aug 15, 2012, 2:48:46 PM

This is absolutely Brilliant. I love the colours you've used such as using the light and dark effect. One Character looks so innocent whereas the other looks rather evil. It's very beautiful and the colours in it are magnificent. It's a different way of doing art as I can tell. You can also tell you've been very careful with the drawings and it does look as though it took a lot of technique. Now, the only downfall I have with this image is on the girls face, she has moles on both sides so it gives me the idea that you've sort of copied and pasted the one side of the face, I don't know whether it's supposed to be like that but it looks amazing either way. Well done! Best one I've 'Critique'd' so far!

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Critique by ~xHappyYellowStripes Aug 15, 2012, 12:26:24 PM

haha okay now I am addicted to writing critiques so here it goes xD

1. I love your new coloring style, it is to die for : D

2. I love how you noticed the two birthmarks Hino has under her eyes, unlike some people I have commissioned xD

3. If I were a stranger and you tell me that this is your first time drawing Madara, I wouldn't believe you xD
He is so accurate, the hair, the eyes, the everything.

4. I really think you got their personalities. Hino is supposed to be all cutesy, adorable and kawaiidesumoe xD , but she can kick your ass when it's needed, so this picture portrays that perfectly. And Madara is supposed not to care about everything and his expression represents that perfectly.

5. I love the texture on her kimono and the color of it. Actually, I love the color on everything xD

Overall: asdf baggy sleeves xD